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Channel Believix by rebecca0105 Channel Believix by rebecca0105
The :new: version of Channel Believix!! :squee: I changed all! :la: The wings, the base, the outfit, the shoes!! Well, mostly the shoes and wings :)

Stripes and Sparkles on wings *EnchantingRainbow
BG Sparkles *redheadstock
Everuthing else *rebecca0105
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:iconmiss-kaylin:
For vision, you easily acquire five stars! Channel's new Believix design is gorgeous and it's evident a lot of thought has been put into it. You seem to have had a wonderful image in your head, and you've portrayed it very well in this piece.

For originality, I have given you three stars. The outfit is unique and very lovely, but I have seen similar poses used many times for Winx artworks. Using less popular and widely used poses will help your work stand out.

You receive four and a half stars for technique. The colors you have used in this piece work very nicely together, giving your character an aura of "together-ness." They are very uniform and give the piece a nice, calming feeling while still creating an impact. There is still room for improvement in your technique, but you're on your way to mastery.

For impact, I reward you with four stars. As stated before, it is very similar to other Winx pictures, and yet, there is something magical about it that makes it more than "just another Winx drawing." Your character is lovely and you have done a fantastic job of illustrating her.

Overall, this piece is nearly flawless. Job well done, love!
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Hello! :wave:
I decided to critique this because you posted a journal about a certain deviant that wrote a very blunt, rude, and unfair critique on this.

Her hair is flowing well according to her stance. In my opinion, I think it looks very nice!

In general, her head and neck shape look very nice. These are also well drawn according to the style you drew it in.

The wings are great; in fact, they are my favorite part of the picture! Maybe they could be a tad bit lighter so that way they look a bit more translucent, like fairy wings.

Her clothes and color scheme are great, but her skirt should be just a tad bit longer, or more layered. Imagine if she bent over; you'd be able to see her panties! :icontsumugiplz: Her shoes don't really match the color scheme and style of her dress though, but they still manage to look nice on her! Maybe instead of the light green sparkle in her shoes, try white or a lighter green instead. I mean, you don't have to, but try it out sometime. ^^

Here's the part that has the most flaws; the anatomy. I understand that the style of art is very angular, but I think her waist is a little too small. Maybe widen her abdomen (or belly or whatever it's called) and make her breasts a tad bit larger. Don't overdo it though, then in won't be the same anymore!

I really like the arms and hands! I don't really know how to explain them, I just know that they look great! They, of course, do not follow correct anatomy. But of course, this is a cartoon style that doesn't follow human anatomy very well anyway :XD:

Her left leg is a little awkward. Her thigh and calve are sort of proportional, but her knee needs to be a tad bit wider. Oh, and make her calve just a bit rounder; Other than that, I think it looks great! Her pose is cute; I like how you pulled off a simple stance and made it look special!

Not really much to say about the background; I just like it in general. Maybe you should add more sparkle to the font so it pops out a bit more.


If I misspelled or missed anything, please excuse me. Spanish is my first language, and I often get things mixed up. >///>
Please reply with your thoughts on my critique. This is my first time doing this c:
I would feel a bit down if you just said "Thanks for the critique!". I took the time out of my night and message-checking to do this for you because I know you really wanted tips on improving, and opinions on how others see your art.
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Winx-Beauty Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's very cute sweetie <3
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rebecca0105 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx :)
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:iconhaterchox:
Terrible! No one watches the stupid Winx Club or whatever that crap is. You so stole that off of the Internet.
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zxck9 Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YOUR CRAP HATERCHOX,I BET YOU CAN'T EVEN MAKE ART FUCKER!!!! SO IF YOU HATE ART DON"T SAY ANYTHING AT ALL!!!!
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Winx-Beauty Dec 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Excuse me? So many people watch Winx Club, it's an amazing show! And she didn't steal it! She's an amazing and talented artist. And she made it HERSELF! Don't dare to troll her again, understand? :X
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rebecca0105 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and you want me to prove that?
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SweetSunshine10 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excuse me but that's wrong :3 Many people enjoy winx club and her design is completely original and fantastic. Please be polite.
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RozenTemptation Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, very much peopl watch :D It's a amazing show, I think you would not understand since you're a damn troll, And no, sh didn't stole, she made It, she's a awesome artist, and you're a idiot, If you continu lik this, we will kick your ass off the internet ;)
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:iconartfan1298:
The wings are BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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rebecca0105 Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx :)
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